Hey guys. This is a song my friend and I made and wrote. Trying to get some constructive criticism back from it.
Yes we used autotune, I'm not the best singer in the world so I had to use it with some parts. Don't worry I don't think your ears will bleed lol
For some reason I can't embed..anyone want to help? Not sure if it's allowed
Here it is! -
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Dabey2oY8cQ
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dennis20014 wrote:
Hey guys. This is a song my friend and I made and wrote. Trying to get some constructive criticism back from it.
Yes we used autotune, I'm not the best singer in the world so I had to use it with some parts. Don't worry I don't think your ears will bleed lol
For some reason I can't embed..anyone want to help? Not sure if it's allowed
Here it is! -
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Dabey2oY8cQ
Yes we used autotune, I'm not the best singer in the world so I had to use it with some parts. Don't worry I don't think your ears will bleed lol
For some reason I can't embed..anyone want to help? Not sure if it's allowed
Here it is! -
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Dabey2oY8cQ
Nope, not allowed to embed.
And can't access Youtube for some reason this morning.
But constructive criticism in =28? Good luck with that.
Clearly you should research where you are posting this first =/.
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Eh well thanks for the try bud! =]
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Yes we used autotune
dennis20014 wrote:
Yes we used autotune,
Edited, Dec 14th 2010 1:28pm by lolgaxe
George Carlin wrote:
I think it’s the duty of the comedian to find out where the line is drawn and cross it deliberately.
You obviously don't even know how to properly use Autotune. You're supposed to fix notes that are a little bit off, not do a T-Pain impersonation.
dennis20014 wrote:
constructive criticism
Delete your youtube account, give up and get real jobs.
"I have lost my way
But I hear a tale
About a heaven in Alberta
Where they've got all hell for a basement"
But I hear a tale
About a heaven in Alberta
Where they've got all hell for a basement"
Without the lyrics, I would have had no clue what you were saying as that was completely unintelligible. I don't know if it was due to the Autotune or your singing or if that's just what the kids are listening to these days with their MTVs and their Sony Walkingmen and their "automatic" transmissions.
Belkira wrote:
Wow. Regular ol' Joph fan club in here.
The vocal melody is asynchronous to the music.
The vocals are too loud.
The music was not written or performed by you.
My ears are bleeding.
The vocals are too loud.
The music was not written or performed by you.
My ears are bleeding.
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I clicked away after 12 seconds because it made my ears bleed.
Jophiel wrote:
completely unintelligible.
Whoever lied to you and told you this was good should be beaten within an inch of their life.
NixNot wrote:
Whoever lied to you and told you this was good should be beaten within an inch of their life.
Seriously, why would someone so horrible at singing even attempt this?
Not trying to be an *** about this, but you or whoever put that together is somewhat tone deaf. And by somewhat I mean very. Other than that, not really my style or taste in music, but the out of tune parts were an immidiate "end song"
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No lie... I kept skipping forward assuming there was a joke to all of this, and that I was being naive for thinking it was real. It's THAT bad, I'm sorry.
I made it through 30sec of it..and it is 7min long? haha..it is epic fail.
First 15 seconds, thought it was a super awkward teenage ******.
Next 30, no idea what you're saying except "body."
Why did you even use the autotuning where it was used? It's not used to fix the song at all, it just makes it, as said, sound like you were trying to be T-Pain.
No, sorry, this isn't good.
Next 30, no idea what you're saying except "body."
Why did you even use the autotuning where it was used? It's not used to fix the song at all, it just makes it, as said, sound like you were trying to be T-Pain.
No, sorry, this isn't good.
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And by "yon task", I meaneth not merely thine use of autotune, I meaneth that hideous noise which thou hast misnamed "singing".
I think it was an excellent song and that you should continue to make more and allow us the privilege to sample more of it.
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Uglysasquatch wrote:
I think it was an excellent song and that you should continue to make more and allow us the privilege to sample more of it.
Don't keep it all to ourselves, he should give ****************************************** a try so the whole world can enjoy it.
I might listen to this later.
I then might download it, remix it, and make a mockery of it. However... that would require both time and effort, as well as having to listen to something that is causing massive ear hemorrhaging.
Perhaps I will just ridicule you from here.
And, as another idea, perhaps if you try harder to suck, you might somehow invert the suckage curvature and come out the other side as completely awesome.
Of course, that's impossible, but it would be entertaining to see them try
I then might download it, remix it, and make a mockery of it. However... that would require both time and effort, as well as having to listen to something that is causing massive ear hemorrhaging.
Perhaps I will just ridicule you from here.
And, as another idea, perhaps if you try harder to suck, you might somehow invert the suckage curvature and come out the other side as completely awesome.
Of course, that's impossible, but it would be entertaining to see them try
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Sometimes the best approach to something like this is just full-on honesty.
That was pretty ******* terrible.... and by pretty ******* terrible, I mean it was one of the worst things I've ever heard.
That was pretty ******* terrible.... and by pretty ******* terrible, I mean it was one of the worst things I've ever heard.
Talking in a whiny voice in not singing.
Banging whatever you like in sort of rhythm whatever you feel like is not drumming.
Auto-tune does not make it better.
Banging whatever you like in sort of rhythm whatever you feel like is not drumming.
Auto-tune does not make it better.
dennis20014 wrote:
Hey guys. This is a song my friend and I made and wrote. Trying to get some constructive criticism back from it.
Yes we used autotune, I'm not the best singer in the world so I had to use it with some parts. Don't worry I don't think your ears will bleed lol
For some reason I can't embed..anyone want to help? Not sure if it's allowed
Here it is! -
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Dabey2oY8cQ
Yes we used autotune, I'm not the best singer in the world so I had to use it with some parts. Don't worry I don't think your ears will bleed lol
For some reason I can't embed..anyone want to help? Not sure if it's allowed
Here it is! -
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Dabey2oY8cQ
It's bland, unoriginal, boring, and kind of lame. Pick up an instrument and make something original.
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